Script + Storyboard

The Script:

 Characters:

The university student

Their little sibling 

Narrator 

Little sibling grabs the jar of money and puts a 1$ bill into the jar 

Little sibling: “Now do we have enough?”

The University Student : (sighs) “Nope! Not yet. But hey, if we keep saving up, we might be able to go next year, kiddo.” (ruffles sibling’s hair)

Little sibling: “NEXT YEAR?! I can’t wait THAT long!!”

Little sibling crosses their arms, making a little pouty face as the University Student walks away, leaving their laptop open.

Little sibling: “There must be somewhere we can go…”

Little sibling stares into the laptop, an idea icon pops out and they type. “How about…. Bali!”

The camera enters the laptop with a zoom transition and goes to a beach. The characters look mildly uncomfortable. 

Narrator: “Seriously?! the beach? That is so last summer”

University Student: “Ughh.. IT’s SO crowded!”

Little sibling sees that older sibling is stressed out, grabs the older sibling and goes to the next scene

Little sibling: “C’mon, let’s get out of here. How about…?”

[University Student and little sibling arrive at the next locations with a whoosh transition.]

Little sibling: “The cafe’s !!”

Narrator: “This is more like it ! A nice relaxing holiday with amazing buildings and delicious food !”

Narrator: “Experience Bali. The real Bali” 

Made by both Zoe and Me 

This is our storyboard made by Zoe 

Self reflection: We didn't use part of the script where the narrator says stuff and made some changes to some of the dialogue. The storyboard helped us visualize the actual advert that we are going to create even though it wasn't 100% accurate. I learned how to make appropriate dialogue for the actresses.